Besides the fact that it should only be 1 'then', it should be 'than'. Also, rapped = raped, and 'getting face' = 'getting your face'. Lol, but anyways...that's just if you really wanted to be a grammar nazi.
the whole point behind the photo is that i wanted it to seem like i was typing while fighting but, i guess i Failed. Or maybe you failed cuz you didn't get it.