You better put me and Leila in the next one!
/wags finger
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zahrah said: Ramuh.Rowland said: The Chronicles of Leila, Featuring Zahrah? /shrug Bismarck.Nevill said: zahrah said: Ramuh.Rowland said: The Chronicles of Leila, Featuring Zahrah? /shrug Leila would never allow such a thing. I'LL KILL YOU, JAGGEDY-EARED JACK! That was MY Zahrah! Odin.Liela said: Bismarck.Nevill said: zahrah said: Ramuh.Rowland said: The Chronicles of Leila, Featuring Zahrah? /shrug Leila would never allow such a thing. I'LL KILL YOU, JAGGEDY-EARED JACK! That was MY Zahrah! She started it with her tales of rabbit stew... Row could start writing in a second-person perspective, involving anyone who reads.
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Awesome story!!! Keep it up ;D
>_> I smiled just like I did when I used to watch Saturday Morning cartoons. The band is back together :D! Really loved the party tactics description. Oh so awesome! Trick Attack for the win!
Narcissism round 3! Go! I kind of wish you had a Blue Mage in there who used the breath attacks. Not necessarily because that's how anyone uses Blue Mage these days, but back in the good ole 75 days I remember Cannonball and Heat Breath being big staples. Plus Frost Breath and/or Bad Breath are mega useful in BLU70 genkai. Not much of a suggestion, but you could make a nasty BLU who constantly ate meat with onions. >_> As a plot stop/break/comic relief/kill off/bad guy. I also like Spence's suggestion. Ramuh.Rowland said: I don't honestly have that much experience with BLUs, Vyre. And I've sort of been jumping around with everyone's "levels". In the beginning of the story you see Erik gain a level off of some rabbits/sheep in Ronfaure. Also getting their *** kicked but yet staying alive to Bune would imply they're already up to level 30-40 by that point. So that just shows how much time has actually passed. BLUs technically didn't "exist". This story is basically pre-ToAU released, hence no one understanding why Erik is wearing the gear he was. No one knew Whitegate ever was a place yet. If I do continue this story as a part 2 or some sort of extended story it would most likely take place is the Near East. Holy balls! It's awesome! /MNIGHTATWIST!
O.o Whitegate?
If he awoke in Whitegate, this story cannot ne over! I sense a Garland imposter!
Well done chap. I write a bit myself, so I understand that the ideas do not always flow. Take as much of a break as you need.
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Ramuh.Rowland said: I'm not sure if I'm done done, or if I'm just out of ideas done. I can always come back to it later and make a new chapter to the story. OOOOOAH! ANNND THE NEXT MOVEH THEY GET A VISITS FROM DANG OLE GOOOD OLE DERFYCLAUSE HANDIN PRESSYS! O__________O |
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